Madmorigan that map looks great! I can totally see that being useful to pull out in a game where the party is going to Lazlo.
It was mentioned earlier that the scale of the city might be smaller than 3 million people, but honestly if you were to keep scaling the city up you're likely to lose detail that would otherwise be useful to a game. As it is right now, I can imagine you pulling up the map, zooming in, and saying that the party members are running up 'this' street, and they see the bad guy that their chasing run into 'that' alleyway. At the same time it is also certainly big enough to easily get lost in and I can't imagine a scenario played out in a game where you need to have more city blocks for the party to explore than what is already in that map.
That generator site you used is pretty cool too. My brother was using a different random map generator for his D&D games, and I'll have to show him this one.
As for adding more points of interest into the map, have you consulted the new Lazlo Raw preview book?
I just got a copy of it a few days ago and have been reading through it. I think it's a pretty good book so far, although I am lucky that I came into the book without any preconceptions of the city, having never played a game set in the city before.
There is enough details on the city provided in the Raw Lazlo book to really construct a very detailed map. It describes 10 districts (such as the Harbor and University districts) each with 5-10 points of interest described in them. Such points of interest are each described with a few paragraphs with locations ranging from important places like the Congress of Electorate buildings, to more mundane places like to Karell's Florist flower shop or the Harbor Lakewall dikes/levees.
Based on what I gather about your planned game, I think the Lazlo book is likely more detailed than what you need in your game at this time. When the final book comes out, I don't think your players would mind if some simple things like the names of a few districts changed a little with the publication of a new map should they visit the city at a later date, especially when it seems like the gist of your map lines up with what I can see described in the book.
You mentioned maybe adding a military base into your map, and one of the larger landmarks the new book mentions is the Toronto airport (now called Lazlo Regional Airport) that has a military base (and HQ of the Lazlo Defense Force) on the site.
Another thing that kind of stands out when I look at your map is that the author mentions that the city of Lazlo has three nexus points forming a triangle around the city, each with pyramids to help tame the leylines. Other than that, if I was running a game in Lazlo right now, I would steal your work and use it in my game in a heartbeat.
If you are looking for more inspiration you could also look at the modern map of Toronto on Google Maps, and take a look at some the the street names and layout of the existing city. The layout will be out of date by roughly 400 years, but I'm willing to bet you can find something useful in it. When I try to overlap the two images and toggle between your map and the google map of Toronto to see where things line up, it looks like the Toronto airport would be somewhere around the border between your Greendales and Highbourne districts and could be as large as southern half or third of the Greendales district.
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On a side note Mr. Hotrod might like to hear that at the same time I purchased the Lazlo Raw Preview, I purchased your new book Duty's Edge, and am looking forward to reading it. As I mentioned to you a few years ago I was doing some world building in the Phoenix Empire, and am eager to mine your book for ideas and insights. Paging through it I see you have quite a few chapters based in Rama City of Doom. After I am done reading it I'll let you know what I think.
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If you like I could take some notes while I am reading to describe my impressions of your work, or what I as a reader was thinking about at different stages of the book? I know that some authors enjoy reading that kind of feedback, although it has probably been a while since you finished writing the book. Let me know if there is anything in particular you'd like my impression on.
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